Sunday, September 25, 2011

Week 5

The revisions that I plan on adding to my piece would be a trailer of an original shown next to a remake. Add a bit more to my reasoning behind why people are against it. I also plan to caption the content that I will include with my piece in order to make it look better. I would also like to get more into my introduction before I turn it in also.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Jesse,

    I like the idea of putting the trailers next to each other. For that, make sure that you are very specific in your captioning beneath of what the readers should get out of it.

    What do you plan on adding to your intro?

    Please let me know if you have any questions or need any help with your piece!

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